10-04-2016, 12:16 AM
Your staff application was very understandable, and very relatable in comparison to mine. you made simple sentences, whilst making sense, you did give me a thought of small critique comments i can help you with. Just want to say that #3 and #5 both, made sense, but sentences were too short, id love to know more about you, if you are going to be in staff. i Want to build a friendly relationship with one another on the staff team, but i cannot do that if i have no information about you. Of Course you did put on #12, you will get along with all staff, but it seems that in a simple miss argument, you continuously disrespected me, and i didn't find that as a good first impression, you must learn to fix your intake of critique. Of course you have ALOT of potential to be on the staff team, i personally enjoyed your application, hope you can tweak some things tho. 
~ Hue Mungus
~ Hue Mungus